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Practicing my 3rd Acrylics :love:



seems like i am not good at photography, can't take a good photo of this work :giggle:

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You may not be good at photography, but you are amazing at acrylics!

I love the colors you used, and the various shades of blue. The ring around her eyes is very interesting and adds a sense of mystery to the subject. I love the shadings on the skin tones, they look very natural and realistic. Her left arm looks a little funny to me, like it is withered at the end. Perhaps it should have been a little larger? The details are very well done, and I especially like how you did the highlights in her hair.

I think the red flower, being such a different color from the rest of this piece really stands out and is a very nice touch.

I'm sure there was some artistic reason for painting the blue triangle on her nose, but personally, I find it rather distracting. But that's just my humble (and I mean VERY humble) opinion.

I love how you did her eyes. They are quite mesmerizing, and so well detailed. I know how hard this must be to achieve with acrylics, at least for me!

The hint of blush in her cheeks is a very nice touch, and keeps her skin from looking too sallow. This was very nicely done, and blended so very well!

Overall, this is one amazing, and well done portrait. The composition is great, and your painting style is superb.

I look forward to seeing more of your paintings. You have a real talent for it!
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You're dealing very well with acrylics, especially for a third painting! This picture is heading towards realism, so my critique and advice will head towards it, too.

On the technique. You already know how to gradient smoothly, like on her back. I'd consider making the background more in this manner, instead of vertical brush lines - while in the right part it goes nicely with the model, on the left it distracts from her, especially the strong diffrence between the really dark shadow and the brighter green. A smooth gradient would do much better in this place - and if you controll it, making it the most blurred in the left border, you can achieve a sence of depth, like the lady was standing by a wall, at a certain angle.

About her hair, try to use the same smooth gradient as a base, and then add the subtle lines.

Consider anatomy. When drawing anything living - a human, animal, perhaps an alien - always try to imagine how it would look like when moving. Imagine this lady straightening her arm, her palm and fingers. What do we get? Her forefinger is too long. Take a look at your own hand - you can easily see that in a healthy hand the middle finger is the longest, then the ring-finger is a bit shorter, and then we've got the forefinger. I recommend taking a look at this tutorial, it's very helpful. A hand is one of the hardest parts of human body to draw and despite the mentioned issue, you've done it nicely anyway.

You've shown that you're not afraid to use darker tones on her body, don't hesitate to use them around her nose, too, especially at its bottom, to make it stand out more.

Also, her back seems to lack a shading that would mark her spine. With this pose, it should be visible in the bottom right corner of the painting. This would also break the plain skin gradient and make it more interesting.

What do I really like about this painting, it's that you've used spots of red/burgundy colour to grab the viewer's attention to her face, along with the well staning-out eyes. Her lips, eyes and the flower are the best painted part of this picture, so you've picked up the focal point very well.
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cenart Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
great
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Lea5000 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
fantastic!
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EvilineMoonflesh Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Featured you in my journal [link]
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
You are very kind my friend i am so thankful :love:
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EvilineMoonflesh Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
:love:
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Shades-Of-Lethe Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Superb!! She carries such a mystery in her eyes... wonderful expression! You are so talented!! :hug:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Thank you so much, I am flattered thank you dear :love:
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arihoff Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
wow this is stunning :):) amzing job as always, all you work is superb :)))
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Dear Ari thank you so much :love:
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arihoff Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
hey mona, no prob you very welcome always :):) all the best to you #1
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
Thank you very much, such an honor for me :love:
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sylverface Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
no problem ;)
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Thank you so much my friend :love: it is my honor
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Laurasshadesofgrey Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful work dear:huggle:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
Thank you very much, i am flattered :love::huggle:
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Laurasshadesofgrey Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Youre welcome:hug:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
wow such an honor to be in your feature, thank you so much :love:
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vampirekingdom Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   Digital Artist
Thank you to you for your friendship my dear!!!:love:
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LadyPirotessa Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Thank you so much :heart:
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LadyPirotessa Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Quite welcome :)
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Hi, featured this in my journal [link] :blowkiss:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Thank you so much my dear, it is my pleasure :heart::love:
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Feature time [link] :heart:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
wow you are so sweet thank you so much my honor dear :heart:
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BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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Maestro74 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
revisited this drawing..
it's soooo good! clearly one of your best..if not the best :)
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
My dear thank you so much :hug: I am flattered
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Thank you very much dear, it is my honor :love:
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kwalden Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love this. Gorgeous work.
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
You are very kind my friend :hug: Thank you so much
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kwalden Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome!
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Thank you so much dear friend :hug:it is a pleasure for me to be in your journal :hug:
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Chrisma60 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Kythra Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is a work of a professional , very beautiful and i love her pose and facial details ...
so good to come back and see such beauty!
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
My dear thank you so much You are so kind and so amazing :heart: I love you :hug: :) You flatter me
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Kythra Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you deserve the best dear , the work is outstanding!
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
wow thank you so much my dear it is my pleasure :love:
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Morbidouce Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice :D
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
:love: thank you so much my dear
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Morbidouce Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
My sweet friend thank you so much, it is my honor :heart:
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BiBiARTs Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
it's always my pleasure, my dear sweet friend Mona :heart:, I love your works!
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