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Beneath My Soul by MonaParvin Beneath My Soul by MonaParvin
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I think these kinds of elements that compose the art are very interesting. You could cover a large area of an art with these elements. There are a trend lately for this style.
I see that you made a small composition, but you could search out for a larger area of art, with diferent types of elements to fullfil the compositions. I might not be clear, but I`m talking about these graphisms you made. You can explore them more, so you can make larger arts.
There ares a couple of artists you may like to see, and to get inspiration from their way of making these elements.
Search for:
iain macarthur (he is on DepthCore too - proud).
elsevila - this one has account on dA. I don`t know if I mispelled his name.
They are the guys that I most consider for these issue I am talking about.
Besides, the overall of the art is just so smooth and clean, its very beautiful. The colors, too, are very good.
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This piece stands out because it is stylized and deliberate. The lack of shading and simplication of line art makes it pop to the viewer extremely well.
I think the only thing I would do differently is to stick to one technigue here. You have no shading through out the piece except for her shell, which disrupts the harmony of the simplification of the piece. While it's good to push your boundaries and experiment, and trust me, I highly encourage it, don't try to throw too much into one work.
I think if you ever revisit this one, try adding detail to her shell as you did to her torso and arm. That area is brilliant and should be pushed further.
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dugbud62 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh that I like, it is true, yet I get the sense you were feeling blue.
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
Thank you very much :)
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daxusx Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
lovely:love:
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Thank you so much :love:
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daxusx Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
welcome monta mona :iconindrapangestu:
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Alizadeh-Art Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
thats why i appreciate more traditional art,,this is absoloutly epic:clap:
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011
Thank you dear, you are very kind :)
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Alizadeh-Art Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
my pleasure dear,in idat vaghean yeke:)
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011
Merci azizam :)
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daxusflashlight Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
uh! :D sweet composition! did you use wacom?
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
Thank you dear, no it is hand drawing and then i used photoshop to color it :)
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avo-256 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful!!
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
Thank you very much :)
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wtrw Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
well done, you rae very talented..!!!!

:hug:

:)
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2011
Thank you very much my dear :hug:
You too love your work :)
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ronaldsegovia Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Professional General Artist
and very talented
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
Thank you dear :heart:
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fleebites Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh wow, I absolutely LOVE THIS. The simple colourscheme, the quaintness of her expression, the linework and use of exaggeration . . . There are so many elements that just tie it all together in one neat, yummy little package. This looks like something you'd see on an album cover. Very cool indeed.
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011
Oh thank you dear, you are too kind :hug: :heart:
I am learning to draw and paint on my own very recently
so your nice words means a lot to me :)
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boucha-designer Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Student Interface Designer
amazing !
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011
:) thank you you are very kind
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socialspy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
beautiful.the name, colors and the meaning.
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011
I am flattered by all your comments and visit :)
Thank you so much dear :heart:
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:iconyuhon:
Yuhon Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
I really like the colors and your sense for details ♥ very pretty hun
it would be a nice design for a t-shirt :)
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
Thank you so much dear :heart: You are very kind :)
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tolagunestro Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Lovely!
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
thank you very much dear :)
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tolagunestro Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
:]
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
;p
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xCINNx Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Very nice framing, and I like the colour combination especially. Great work, as always. :)
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Thank you so much :)
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xCINNx Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
Always, Mona. :)
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Black-Rhapsody Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ella parece tan triste...:petting:
Escondida bajo su caparazón...
Ojalá pueda liberarse de esa cáscara algún día. :rose:

I love this colors. :heart:
This work is very beautiful and sad at the same time.
Amazing

:hug:
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Yes hopefully :)
You are so nice :heart:
Thank you my dear :heart: :huggle:
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Black-Rhapsody Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:aww: :huggle:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
:heart:
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Maestro74 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love art where everyone has to find their own meaning to the picture!¨
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Thank you very much :)
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sonia-p Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
i love the idea ...youe works are really amazin:blowkiss:g.:blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss:
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Dear Sonia thank you :)
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sonia-p Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
:blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss::blowkiss:
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arihoff Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
amazing like always mona :):) love the colors:):)love the emotion that she portrays :):)#1
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MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
Thank you very much :)
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:iconarihoff:
arihoff Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
my pleasure mona , anytime you very welcome:):):)
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LeoTigress Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
She seems so sad :(
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
:) I know
Thank you for your support :)
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LeoTigress Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Gladly given ^^
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unwana Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
cool stuff
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:iconmonaparvin:
MonaParvin Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011
Thank you very much :)
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genesis-rdz Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is great!! i like it like it like it!! :iconfblikeplz:
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